Mar 25 2009
Frozen To Freedom …..( Sorry To The ‘Scent Of Oblivion’ )
The lanes are crowded
The destination is distant
The journey is long
And I am alone
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The rain is pelting
The heart is palpitating
He is smiling
And I am in love
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The nights are short
The mornings are bright
The journey is pleasant
And I am in company
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The life is droning
The acts are stanch
The destination is diminished
And I am chained
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The lanes are crowded again
The destination is far still
The journey is exasperating
And I am free
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For I love freedom so much
That him that I love
I wanted to be free
Even from him!!
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And thus I am frozen to freedom…..
(I am sorry to someone - The LEADER, The Friend (perhaps, perhaps not.) Will miss the SHERing Jaana. Will be back. Some things are pulling back , for good, perhaps, perhaps not. )
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The poem is lovely. nice cascading effect. and the pun - frozen to freedom. GREAT. I dont know what “ulterior” reason/sense lurks behind those letters. all rests on whats next. keep writing.
Allah nigehbaan (this is what you need right now, i reckon)
I really enjoyed the poem it was written very well and had a good flow and pace to it.
Hey ‘Jaana’, thanks so much for such treasured words. And specially the blessings of Lord.
And I am sorry for ‘editing’ the comment. Certain reasons. But I am so glad, that more importantly you understand. Thanks a lot.
And the scents in your poem got totally conveyed. I am obliged for the respect and concern you’ve shown. Honestly. [Dil se tola…..]
“ Allah-Nighebaan“
ANd mickey, thanks, am glad you liked the poem, and cared to pour your feedback
**Peace***